College Essay Coaching
Craft Essays That Stand Out
For more than 10 years, I've helped students turn their stories into powerful, authentic college essays. As a college essay coach, I guide students through developing standout personal statements, supplemental essays, and scholarship essays that reflect who they are and what matters to them.
My coaching approach emphasizes storytelling, reflection, and revision, helping students move beyond surface-level achievements to develop essays that reveal their values, perspective, and growth. I help students find and strengthen their authentic voice, which emerges through thoughtful conversation, reflection, and revision.
My impact goes beyond college applications. Through working with me, students become stronger, more capable writers and clearer thinkers and communicators—skills that will serve them throughout college and beyond.
Ready to get started?
For the 2026-27 admissions cycle, there are currently no coaching package spots available. See à la carte support below.
2027-28 Admissions Cycle
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Join the 2027-28 WaitlistNeed-Based Aid and Scholarships
I believe every student deserves strong support with their story, regardless of cost.
Need-Based Aid
Limited need-based aid is available for all coaching services. Mention it when you book a free consultation and I'll share the application.
Ask about aid →First-Gen Personal Statement Scholarship
Each year I award fully funded scholarships to first-generation students for one-on-one support on their Common App personal statement, from brainstorming through final revisions. Applications for the 2027-28 cycle open in January and are due March 31.
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Upcoming Workshops
Finding Your Moment: College Essay Workshop
A live, 2-hour workshop using the Moments Method® to find the story at the heart of your college essays.
October 27 · November 10 · December 17
6–8pm ET · Virtual · $49
As a college essay coach, I offer:
A Structured, Student-Centered Process – Each student receives a clear, personalized plan that reflects their strengths, experiences, and goals, with guidance across each stage of the college application process, from brainstorming meaningful experiences to developing strong personal statements and supplemental essays.
Deep Knowledge of U.S. College Admissions – My work is informed by a nuanced understanding of how selective colleges evaluate applications, helping students craft essays that are authentic, intentional, and well-positioned within the broader admissions context.
Question-Based Feedback & Live Coaching – Through asynchronous feedback and one-on-one sessions, I help students develop authentic narratives that highlight their voices, values, and potential.
Comprehensive Support Across Applications – Coaching packages are designed to support students across multiple schools and deadlines, providing guidance on personal statements, supplemental essays, and scholarship essays while offering continuity, accountability, and structure throughout the admissions cycle.
Looking for tips on brainstorming or revising college essays?
You can explore guides and resources on my blog about developing strong personal statements, supplemental essays, and scholarship essays.
Not sure if your essay is working yet?
Start with my free guide on how to review your own college essay.
College Acceptances
You can view the full list of student college acceptances here
2026-27 Coaching Options
Students can work with me through comprehensive coaching packages or through limited, targeted support, depending on their needs and stage in the process.
Coaching is primarily offered virtually via Zoom. In-person sessions in New York City may be available on a limited basis and are priced separately.
Coaching Packages
I offer coaching packages to support students in developing thoughtful, authentic personal statements and school-specific supplemental essays through a structured, guided, and iterative process. To ensure a highly personalized experience, I intentionally limit my coaching to no more than five students per admissions cycle, allowing for deep engagement, timely feedback, and flexible support. Coaching packages are the primary way to work together.
Core Package
$3,000
Up to 8 schools
Expert Feedback to Help Your Story Stand Out
Struggling to find the right words, or just not sure if your essay is making the impact you want? This one-time, in-depth review is designed to meet you wherever you are in the writing process and help you move forward with clarity and confidence.
At The Revision Coach, I specialize in helping students craft authentic, compelling essays that reflect who they are. With this service, you’ll receive:
Tailored feedback based on your current draft or idea
Support with structure, content, and polishing
Comments on storytelling, flow, voice, tone, clarity, structure, grammar, and alignment with prompts
Clear, actionable next steps to move your essay forward
This isn’t just editing. It’s coaching that helps you grow as a writer and storyteller.
Whether you’re working on a personal statement, supplement, or scholarship essay, I can meet you where you are and help bring your ideas to life.
Turn your draft into a story that admissions officers will remember.
Comprehensive Package
$4,500
Up to 12 schools
Extensive Package
$6,000
Up to 18 schools*
*Students applying to more than 18 schools may add additional schools for $350 per school.
For the 2026-27 admissions cycle, there are currently no coaching package spots available. See details about à la carte support below.
All packages include:
An introductory strategy call (45 minutes)
A comprehensive planning document for May 2026–January 2027, including:
A detailed list of schools with essay prompts and deadlines
A clear timeline for completing the personal statement and supplemental essays
Weekly or biweekly meetings (15-30 minutes)
Up to 3 rounds of feedback per essay
Access to curriculum materials including brainstorming resources, graphic organizers, sample essays and more
À La Carte Coaching Support
Not ready for a full coaching package, or just need extra support? Purchase coaching hours to use flexibly for live 1:1 Zoom sessions or for asynchronous feedback on your drafts.
5+ hours of Expert Coaching (subject to availability)
Reach out about bulk pricing
How you can use your hours:
• Live 1:1 Zoom time, in 15-minute increments
• Asynchronous draft feedback is typically 5-10 minutes for a supplemental essay or 10–20 minutes for a personal statement
• Mix and match across your purchased hours
One-on-One Support to Shape Your Story, Live or On Your Schedule
Need help getting started, organizing your ideas, or refining your writing? This 1:1 coaching offers personalized support designed to meet you exactly where you are, whether you're working on a personal statement, a school-specific supplemental essay, or any other piece of writing.
You choose how to use your time:
Live on Zoom: We meet in real time to talk through your ideas, work on your draft together, and answer your questions as they come up.
Asynchronous review: You send your draft or ideas, and I review your work and return detailed written feedback and next steps.
At The Revision Coach, I help students and writers craft clear, compelling stories that reflect who they are and what they want to say. Either way, we'll identify what's working and tackle the areas that need more clarity or focus.
What to expect:
Brainstorming and idea development
Coaching on structure, voice, tone, and storytelling
Support with word choice, organization, and prompt alignment
Space to ask questions and get unstuck
A clear action plan to carry your writing forward
This is more than feedback. It's a collaborative process to build your confidence and strengthen your writing with expert guidance, in whatever format works best for you.
Whether you're facing a blank page or revising a draft, I'll help you shape your ideas into writing that feels true to you and resonates with your audience.
College Essay Coaching FAQs
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A college essay coach helps students identify meaningful experiences, develop authentic stories, and refine their writing through multiple drafts. In addition to providing feedback on personal statements, supplemental essays, and scholarship essays, a coach also helps students stay organized, manage multiple application deadlines, and stay motivated throughout the writing process. The goal is not just to edit essays, but to help students think deeply about their experiences and express them clearly in their own voice.
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Most students begin brainstorming their personal statement in the spring or early summer before senior year. While supplemental essay prompts are typically released in August, many schools ask similar types of questions—such as community essays or “Why this major?” essays—so we often begin brainstorming ideas for those earlier. Starting early gives students time to reflect, draft, and revise thoughtfully.
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It varies, but most strong personal statements take about 3 drafts to develop fully. The first draft helps students get their ideas on the page, while later drafts focus on strengthening the story, deepening reflection, and clarifying their voice. In my coaching packages, students receive up to three rounds of feedback per essay, which usually provides enough opportunity to thoughtfully revise and refine the final essay.
Supplemental essays often require fewer drafts. By the time students begin writing them, they’ve usually internalized the narrative writing process we use for the personal statement. Supplemental prompts also tend to be more straightforward, and many colleges ask similar types of questions—such as community essays or “Why this major?” essays—so students can often adapt ideas across schools and focus on tailoring the essay to each institution rather than starting from scratch.
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Yes. Coaching packages include support for the Common App personal statement and supplemental essays across multiple schools. Students receive guidance brainstorming ideas, developing strong narratives, and revising their writing throughout the application process.
I also provide support for scholarship essays, although those are typically handled separately from the college application coaching packages.
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Most students begin working with me in mid-to-late May, after AP exams, when they have more time to reflect and begin brainstorming their personal statement. From there, we continue working together throughout the summer and fall as students draft their personal statement, develop supplemental essays, and revise their applications.
Our work typically continues until all applications are completed, usually by January of senior year. Coaching is also flexible, since I recognize that students have busy schedules during the summer and school year. We adjust meeting frequency and feedback timelines to ensure students stay on track while balancing other commitments.
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For coaching packages, 75% of the fee is due upfront to reserve a spot in my coaching schedule. The remaining 25% is due once a student’s applications are completed. This structure allows families to secure their place early while keeping part of the payment tied to the completion of the process.
A single hour of à la carte coaching can be purchased directly through the website. For packages of 5+ hours, reach out to me directly at nick@learnrevision.com to set up billing. After purchase or outreach, I follow up within 24 hours with instructions for scheduling a Zoom session or submitting a draft for review.
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Yes, in two ways. Need-based aid is available for all of my coaching services. Mention it when you book a free consultation, and I'll share the application. Separately, each year I award fully funded scholarships to first-generation students for one-on-one support on their Common App personal statement. Applications open in January and are due March 31, with recipients notified by April 15. Sign up here to be notified when applications open.
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I ask that students provide at least 24 hours notice when rescheduling or cancelling a session. Sessions cancelled with less than 24 hours notice are charged at 50% of the session fee, and no-shows are charged the full session fee. You can read the full policy here.
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Coaching hours can be used flexibly for live 1:1 Zoom sessions or for asynchronous feedback on your drafts. Live sessions are billed in 30-minute increments, and asynchronous draft feedback is billed in 5-minute increments. It is typically 5-10 minutes for a supplemental essay and 10–20 minutes for a personal statement, depending on length.